Category: Asian Studies

Please provide an answer that is 100% original and do not copy the answer to thi

Please provide an answer that is 100% original and do not copy the answer to this question from any other website since I am already well aware of this. I will be sure to check this.
Please be sure that the answer comes up with way less than 18% on Studypool’s internal plagiarism checker since anything above this is not acceptable according to Studypool’s standards. I will not accept answers that are above this standard.
No AI or Chatbot! I will be sure to check this.
I need help with a research paper about How was the 1882 Chinese Exclusion Act ultimately the codification and result of decades of anti-Chinese sentiment? I have already done an outline, see attached. My professor commented on the outline, see his comments: “There’s a good start here, but we’re taking on too many issues for a paper of this length. We won’t be able to adequately analyze everything here, so we’ll need to focus on a just a couple of them. Note that the research question implies that we’ll only be focusing on the pre-1882 era (up until the passage of the Chinese Exclusion Act), and not the impacts of the act in the years following (thus, no analysis of the 1888 Scott Act, as that comes later.) There are plenty of precursors to the exclusion act, from the shift from the 1868 Burlingame Treaty to the 1880 Angell Treaty, the 1875 Page Act, and so forth. See Beth Lew-Williams, *The Chinese Must Go* (this can be accessed online the same way as Haney Lopez’s book.)”
See below for requirements:
*The length of the paper is 2,500-3,000 words. Note that the works cited page does not count towards the word count requirement. MLA FORMAT
*A minimum of five sources is necessary, at least three of which must be academic (the OneSearch on the library homepage refers to these as “peer-reviewed,” and you can restrict your searches to such sources. Essentially every book in the library is academic.)
*I will be looking for direct references to all of your sources in the paper itself, whether through direct quoting or paraphrasing. It needs to be clear how your sources have shaped your argument in the paper.
*While the proposal asked for a specific research question, it isn’t necessary to reference it in the paper itself.
*this paper must include the formalities of an introduction, body paragraphs, conclusion, and works cited page (the latter of which will depend on the citation style you are using.) You can also include a title page, but it isn’t necessary.
Requirements: 2500-3000 Words Times New Roman Size 12 Font Double-Spaced MLA Format Excluding the Works Cited Page | .doc file
Please provide an answer that is 100% original and do not copy the answer to this question from any other website since I am already well aware of this. I will be sure to check this.
Please be sure that the answer comes up with way less than 18% on Studypool’s internal plagiarism checker since anything above this is not acceptable according to Studypool’s standards. I will not accept answers that are above this standard.
No AI or Chatbot! I will be sure to check this.
Please be sure to include an introduction paragraph with a clear thesis statement in the last sentence of the introduction paragraph and a conclusion paragraph.
Please be sure to carefully follow the instructions.
No plagiarism & No Course Hero & No Chegg. The assignment will be checked for originality via the Turnitin plagiarism tool.
Please be sure to include at least one in-text citation in each body paragraph.
Please be sure to include the exact page numbers in the in-text citations that relate to the information that you are discussing.

Please provide an answer that is 100% original and do not copy the answer to thi

Please provide an answer that is 100% original and do not copy the answer to this question from any other website since I am already well aware of this. I will be sure to check this.
Please be sure that the answer comes up with way less than 18% on Studypool’s internal plagiarism checker since anything above this is not acceptable according to Studypool’s standards. I will not accept answers that are above this standard.
No AI or Chatbot! I will be sure to check this.
I need help with a research paper about How was the 1882 Chinese Exclusion Act ultimately the codification and result of decades of anti-Chinese sentiment? I have already done an outline, see attached. My professor commented on the outline, see his comments: “There’s a good start here, but we’re taking on too many issues for a paper of this length. We won’t be able to adequately analyze everything here, so we’ll need to focus on a just a couple of them. Note that the research question implies that we’ll only be focusing on the pre-1882 era (up until the passage of the Chinese Exclusion Act), and not the impacts of the act in the years following (thus, no analysis of the 1888 Scott Act, as that comes later.) There are plenty of precursors to the exclusion act, from the shift from the 1868 Burlingame Treaty to the 1880 Angell Treaty, the 1875 Page Act, and so forth. See Beth Lew-Williams, *The Chinese Must Go* (this can be accessed online the same way as Haney Lopez’s book.)”
See below for requirements:
*The length of the paper is 2,500-3,000 words. Note that the works cited page does not count towards the word count requirement. MLA FORMAT
*A minimum of five sources is necessary, at least three of which must be academic (the OneSearch on the library homepage refers to these as “peer-reviewed,” and you can restrict your searches to such sources. Essentially every book in the library is academic.)
*I will be looking for direct references to all of your sources in the paper itself, whether through direct quoting or paraphrasing. It needs to be clear how your sources have shaped your argument in the paper.
*While the proposal asked for a specific research question, it isn’t necessary to reference it in the paper itself.
*this paper must include the formalities of an introduction, body paragraphs, conclusion, and works cited page (the latter of which will depend on the citation style you are using.) You can also include a title page, but it isn’t necessary.
Requirements: 2500-3000 Words Times New Roman Size 12 Font Double-Spaced MLA Format Excluding the Works Cited Page | .doc file
Please provide an answer that is 100% original and do not copy the answer to this question from any other website since I am already well aware of this. I will be sure to check this.
Please be sure that the answer comes up with way less than 18% on Studypool’s internal plagiarism checker since anything above this is not acceptable according to Studypool’s standards. I will not accept answers that are above this standard.
No AI or Chatbot! I will be sure to check this.
Please be sure to include an introduction paragraph with a clear thesis statement in the last sentence of the introduction paragraph and a conclusion paragraph.
Please be sure to carefully follow the instructions.
No plagiarism & No Course Hero & No Chegg. The assignment will be checked for originality via the Turnitin plagiarism tool.
Please be sure to include at least one in-text citation in each body paragraph.
Please be sure to include the exact page numbers in the in-text citations that relate to the information that you are discussing.

Tips for the case analysis journals/questions to focus on:
*Provide the sociohis

Tips for the case analysis journals/questions to focus on:
*Provide the sociohistorical context. How did this case come before the Court?
*What specific issues came before the Court?
*How did the Court rule, and how did they explain their ruling?
*Be sure to discuss the dissent(s), if any.
*What impact did the ruling have on Asian Americans? How did the ruling impact how Asian Americans were racialized and stereotyped?
*As with the reading response journals, seek to make connections where relevant, whether to other aspects of the course material, your own lived experience, or anything else.
*In the end, one way to frame the case analysis journal is to ask: Why is this case important in Asian American legal and political history?
1000-1100 words, double-spaced MLA Format

Using AADJ’s “Tell Your Story. Help Us Track Hate” website (Links to an external

Using AADJ’s “Tell Your Story. Help Us Track Hate” website (Links to an external site.) or #StopAAPIHate’s 2021 reportLinks to an external site., students will choose one narrative to contextualize in terms of the content covered in this course. For example, in examining of “Stopped on a bike ride,” you might draw clear parallels between literatures surrounding the stereotyping of Asian Americans as diseased, racial fetishization and “yellow fever,” and even historic quarantining/exclusion practices.
This project will include the following components:
Your project will take the form of an informal blog entry/paper that utilizes images as needed.
Draws upon at least 3 course sources (provided), as well as at least 2 outside sources that are reliable. Use the attached sample as a guide on how to format the paper.

Using AADJ’s “Tell Your Story. Help Us Track Hate” website (Links to an external

Using AADJ’s “Tell Your Story. Help Us Track Hate” website (Links to an external site.) or #StopAAPIHate’s 2021 reportLinks to an external site., students will choose one narrative to contextualize in terms of the content covered in this course. For example, in examining of “Stopped on a bike ride,” you might draw clear parallels between literatures surrounding the stereotyping of Asian Americans as diseased, racial fetishization and “yellow fever,” and even historic quarantining/exclusion practices.
This project will include the following components:
Your project will take the form of an informal blog entry/paper that utilizes images as needed.
Draws upon at least 3 course sources (provided), as well as at least 2 outside sources that are reliable. Use the attached sample as a guide on how to format the paper.

Using AADJ’s “Tell Your Story. Help Us Track Hate” website (Links to an external

Using AADJ’s “Tell Your Story. Help Us Track Hate” website (Links to an external site.) or #StopAAPIHate’s 2021 reportLinks to an external site., students will choose one narrative to contextualize in terms of the content covered in this course. For example, in examining of “Stopped on a bike ride,” you might draw clear parallels between literatures surrounding the stereotyping of Asian Americans as diseased, racial fetishization and “yellow fever,” and even historic quarantining/exclusion practices.
This project will include the following components:
Your project will take the form of an informal blog entry/paper that utilizes images as needed.
Draws upon at least 3 course sources (provided), as well as at least 2 outside sources that are reliable. Use the attached sample as a guide on how to format the paper.

Answer at least FOUR of the following questions, providing a response of at leas

Answer at least FOUR of the following questions, providing a response of at least 250 words for each question, as instructed below.
Be specific, accurate and complete in giving your answers. Please copy and paste each of the questions of your choosing. Failing to do so will result in a 5-point reduction.
1. According to Confucianism, what kind of quality or virtue is jen or humaneness, and what kind of person can be called a person of humaneness?
2. According to Confucianism, what kind of quality or virtue is righteousness (or conscience), and what kind of person can be called a person of righteousness?
3. What does Confucius mean by “filial piety?” How does the concept of filial piety give shape to the relations between parents and children and between rulers and subjects? 4. Discuss the concept of “rites” or “propriety” as discussed in Confucianism and explain why Confucianism emphasizes the importance of the ancient rituals.
5. Do you think any of Confucius’s thoughts about government could be useful to government leaders today? If so, what do you think could be helpful? If not, what are some of the most important problems involved in the leader’s perspective?

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Reflect on one of the following concepts
1. Orientalism
2. Migration
3. Transn

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Reflect on one of the following concepts
1. Orientalism
2. Migration
3. Transnationalism
4. Race
In your own words, explain what your chosen concept means. Why is it relevant or important to the study of Asian Americans? Use two quotes and cite at least 1 of the course readings. Use approximately 500 words. Choose two quotes the readings that best support your argument. Correctly cite the quote in your response. Citations do not count toward the word count.
Post a short essay (600 words) in response to the thread prompt. Use academic language, proper citation, and good writing style in these short writing assignments.
Grading Rubric for Discussion Board (50 points total for both post and response)
Up to 40 points for Post
40 Excellent writing style, organization, argument, and support (with a well-chosen quote with proper citation of reading and page number). No more than 20% of post was quoted material. The essay was engaging and interesting, answered all prompt questions, incorporated terms and concepts from class, and free of typos, poor grammar, and lack of capitalization.
35 Good writing style, organization, argument, and support (with a well-chosen quote with improper citation of reading) but one or more elements missing. 30 Satisfactory writing style, organization, argument, and support (with a quote, could have been better selected)
25 Needs Improvement
0 No post
Up to 10 points Response to another student
10 Satisfactory completion, thoughtful and well-written
5 Needs improvement or unsatisfactory completion, not thoughtful or well-written
0 No response
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Paper 1: Book Review (2-3 pages, double-spaced, 12-point font)
Student will select one book from a curated list of academic books (see List of Books for Review Essay below) related to topics in Asian American studies. The student is to read through the book and write a review of the chosen book. In the form of an essay, the book review should critically assess the argument made by the book’s author, describe how the author made their argument, and analyze the strengths and weaknesses of the work. Students are encouraged to conduct library searches and draw on external sources (related works or other reviews of the same book) to frame their critical essay. Consider what you might want to research for your final paper when selecting a book.
Please follow the provided Guidelines: APP 311 Book Review Assignment Guidelines 2024.pdf
Actions
List of Books for Review Essay:
Choy, Catherine Ceniza. Empire of Care: Nursing and Migration in Filipino American History. Durham: Duke University Press, 2003. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991003342629702905Links to an external site.
Espiritu, Yen Le. Asian American Panethnicity: Bridging Institutions and Identities. Philadelphia: Temple University Press, 1993. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/1vc4mkk/cdi_globaltitleindex_catalog_335945901Links to an external site.
Lowe, Lisa. The Intimacies of Four Continents. Durham: Duke University Press, 2015. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991007556680002905Links to an external site.
Man, Simeon. Soldiering Through Empire: Race and the Making of the Decolonizing Pacific. Oakland: University of California Press, 2018. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991071796717402901Links to an external site.
Nguyen, Phuong Tran. Becoming Refugee American: The Politics of Rescue in Little Saigon. Champaign: University of Illinois Press, 2017. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/1vc4mkk/cdi_perlego_books_2383040Links to an external site.
Shibusawa, Naoko. America’s Geisha Ally: Reimagining the Japanese Enemy. Cambridge: Harvard University Press, 2006. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991003293919702905Links to an external site.
Srinivasan, Priya. Sweating Saris: Indian Dance as Transnational Labor. Philadelphia: Temple University Press, 2012. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991004733909702901Links to an external site.
Wu, Ellen. The Color of Success: Asian Americans and the Origins of the Model Minority. Princeton: Princeton University Press, 2014. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991072204998402901Links to an external site.
Xiong, Yang Sao. Immigrant Agency: Hmong American Movements and the Politics of Racialized Incorporation. Newark: Rutger University Press, 2022. Contact Professor for a copy of the book.
Yuh, Ji-Yeon. Beyond the Shadow of Camptown: Korean Military Brides in America. New York: New York University Press, 2002. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991067596330502901Links to an external site.
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Preliminary Research Outline
Provide a tentative thesis statement for your research project. List the Digital Archives you will be using. Provide an outline of what each section of your research paper will include.
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Final Research Essay
Paper 2 (Final Project): Research Essay: (5-6 pages, double-spaced, 12-point font)
Students will conduct a research project on a chosen Asian American community or a theme or framework from the course materials. The student must conduct a literature review of relevant works related to their chosen topic. Students must draw upon one or more of the provided Digital Archival Collections (see below) and utilize 4 different sources from the provided archives. Students must develop a clear and concise thesis statement, demonstrate that their argument is supported by the literature, and provide evidence which supports their thesis. Students are encouraged to draw on their Book Review essay to help frame their paper. A Preliminary Research Outline describing what the students will discuss in their essay must be submitted to the Professor. Please be sure to following the provided Guidelines for the Final Paper
Actions
List of Archival Collections:
Asian American Art Oral History ProjectLinks to an external site.
Asian American Movement 1968Links to an external site.
Calisphere: Asian AmericansLinks to an external site.
The Chinese American Experience: 1857-1892Links to an external site.
Chinese Exclusion Act: Primary Documents in American HistoryLinks to an external site.
CSU Japanese American Digitization ProjectLinks to an external site.
Densho ProjectLinks to an external site.
Filipino American Digital Archives
Hmong Oral History Project Links to an external site.
Korean American Digital ArchiveLinks to an external site.
South Asian American Digital ArchiveLinks to an external site.
Texas Tech University: Vietnam Center & Sam Johnson Vietnam ArchiveLinks to an external site.
Viet Stories: Vietnamese American Oral History ProjectLinks to an external site.
General Rubric for Academic Papers:
A- to A+ Excellent effort and result. Includes a thesis statement with a strong, convincing argument that explains why and is supported by the course material. Demonstrates thoughtfulness of the student’s own analysis and of the main points of the course. Very clear, accurate statements, arguments, and summarization; university-level grammar and sentence structure; well-organized paper, meeting word requirement; conclusive language with active voice and relevant, specific vocabulary. Includes properly cited sources with a bibliography. Resources: Center for Learning and Academic Support Services and Chicago Manual of Style (Notes and Bibliography).
B- to B+ Very good to good. Clarity and accuracy need some improvement; sentence-level structure sometimes lacking, with a few grammatical mistakes; paper organized yet not entirely cohesive; unsure voice occasionally inconclusive, sometimes passive and in need of more appropriate, specific vocabulary.
C- to C+ Sufficient. Noticeable lapses of clarity, some inaccurate statements, poorer arguments; some lack of grammatical integrity and inconsistent sentence structure; paper in need of better organization, perhaps not meeting word requirement; inconclusive, sometimes vague language, awkward voice with non-essential ‘padding’ using too little relevant, specific vocabulary.
D- to D+ Lack of clarity, statement and arguments inaccurate; poor, substandard grammar and sentence structure; poorly organized paper, perhaps not meeting word requirement; poor use of language without integral voice, some excess of non-essential ‘padding’ and predominance of non-specific vocabulary.
F Very little clarity with poor statements, weak and inaccurate arguments; unacceptably poor grammar and sentence structure; poorly organized paper perhaps not meeting word requirement; very poor use of language and with no consistent voice, dominated by non-essential ‘padding’ and lacking specific vocabulary.

1
Reflect on one of the following concepts
1. Orientalism
2. Migration
3. Transn

1
Reflect on one of the following concepts
1. Orientalism
2. Migration
3. Transnationalism
4. Race
In your own words, explain what your chosen concept means. Why is it relevant or important to the study of Asian Americans? Use two quotes and cite at least 1 of the course readings.
Use approximately 500 words. Choose two quotes the readings that best support your argument. Correctly cite the quote in your response. Citations do not count toward the word count.
Post a short essay (600 words) in response to the thread prompt. Use academic language, proper citation, and good writing style in these short writing assignments.
Grading Rubric for Discussion Board (50 points total for both post and response)
Up to 40 points for Post
40 Excellent writing style, organization, argument, and support (with a well-chosen quote with proper citation of reading and page number). No more than 20% of post was quoted material. The essay was engaging and interesting, answered all prompt questions, incorporated terms and concepts from class, and free of typos, poor grammar, and lack of capitalization.
35 Good writing style, organization, argument, and support (with a well-chosen quote with improper citation of reading) but one or more elements missing.
30 Satisfactory writing style, organization, argument, and support (with a quote, could have been better selected)
25 Needs Improvement
0 No post
Up to 10 points Response to another student
10 Satisfactory completion, thoughtful and well-written
5 Needs improvement or unsatisfactory completion, not thoughtful or well-written
0 No response
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Paper 1: Book Review (2-3 pages, double-spaced, 12-point font)
Student will select one book from a curated list of academic books (see List of Books for Review Essay below) related to topics in Asian American studies. The student is to read through the book and write a review of the chosen book. In the form of an essay, the book review should critically assess the argument made by the book’s author, describe how the author made their argument, and analyze the strengths and weaknesses of the work. Students are encouraged to conduct library searches and draw on external sources (related works or other reviews of the same book) to frame their critical essay. Consider what you might want to research for your final paper when selecting a book.
Please follow the provided Guidelines: APP 311 Book Review Assignment Guidelines 2024.pdf
Actions
List of Books for Review Essay:
Choy, Catherine Ceniza. Empire of Care: Nursing and Migration in Filipino American History. Durham: Duke University Press, 2003. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991003342629702905Links to an external site.
Espiritu, Yen Le. Asian American Panethnicity: Bridging Institutions and Identities. Philadelphia: Temple University Press, 1993. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/1vc4mkk/cdi_globaltitleindex_catalog_335945901Links to an external site.
Lowe, Lisa. The Intimacies of Four Continents. Durham: Duke University Press, 2015. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991007556680002905Links to an external site.
Man, Simeon. Soldiering Through Empire: Race and the Making of the Decolonizing Pacific. Oakland: University of California Press, 2018. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991071796717402901Links to an external site.
Nguyen, Phuong Tran. Becoming Refugee American: The Politics of Rescue in Little Saigon. Champaign: University of Illinois Press, 2017. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/1vc4mkk/cdi_perlego_books_2383040Links to an external site.
Shibusawa, Naoko. America’s Geisha Ally: Reimagining the Japanese Enemy. Cambridge: Harvard University Press, 2006. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991003293919702905Links to an external site.
Srinivasan, Priya. Sweating Saris: Indian Dance as Transnational Labor. Philadelphia: Temple University Press, 2012. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991004733909702901Links to an external site.
Wu, Ellen. The Color of Success: Asian Americans and the Origins of the Model Minority. Princeton: Princeton University Press, 2014. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991072204998402901Links to an external site.
Xiong, Yang Sao. Immigrant Agency: Hmong American Movements and the Politics of Racialized Incorporation. Newark: Rutger University Press, 2022. Contact Professor for a copy of the book.
Yuh, Ji-Yeon. Beyond the Shadow of Camptown: Korean Military Brides in America. New York: New York University Press, 2002. https://csu-dh.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01CALS_UDH/18hbp0r/alma991067596330502901Links to an external site.
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Preliminary Research Outline
Provide a tentative thesis statement for your research project. List the Digital Archives you will be using. Provide an outline of what each section of your research paper will include.
4
Final Research Essay
Paper 2 (Final Project): Research Essay: (5-6 pages, double-spaced, 12-point font)
Students will conduct a research project on a chosen Asian American community or a theme or framework from the course materials. The student must conduct a literature review of relevant works related to their chosen topic. Students must draw upon one or more of the provided Digital Archival Collections (see below) and utilize 4 different sources from the provided archives. Students must develop a clear and concise thesis statement, demonstrate that their argument is supported by the literature, and provide evidence which supports their thesis. Students are encouraged to draw on their Book Review essay to help frame their paper.
A Preliminary Research Outline describing what the students will discuss in their essay must be submitted to the Professor.
Please be sure to following the provided Guidelines for the Final Paper
Actions
List of Archival Collections:
Asian American Art Oral History ProjectLinks to an external site.
Asian American Movement 1968Links to an external site.
Calisphere: Asian AmericansLinks to an external site.
The Chinese American Experience: 1857-1892Links to an external site.
Chinese Exclusion Act: Primary Documents in American HistoryLinks to an external site.
CSU Japanese American Digitization ProjectLinks to an external site.
Densho ProjectLinks to an external site.
Filipino American Digital Archives
Hmong Oral History Project Links to an external site.
Korean American Digital ArchiveLinks to an external site.
South Asian American Digital ArchiveLinks to an external site.
Texas Tech University: Vietnam Center & Sam Johnson Vietnam ArchiveLinks to an external site.
Viet Stories: Vietnamese American Oral History ProjectLinks to an external site.
General Rubric for Academic Papers:
A- to A+ Excellent effort and result. Includes a thesis statement with a strong, convincing argument that explains why and is supported by the course material. Demonstrates thoughtfulness of the student’s own analysis and of the main points of the course. Very clear, accurate statements, arguments, and summarization; university-level grammar and sentence structure; well-organized paper, meeting word requirement; conclusive language with active voice and relevant, specific vocabulary. Includes properly cited sources with a bibliography. Resources: Center for Learning and Academic Support Services and Chicago Manual of Style (Notes and Bibliography).
B- to B+ Very good to good. Clarity and accuracy need some improvement; sentence-level structure sometimes lacking, with a few grammatical mistakes; paper organized yet not entirely cohesive; unsure voice occasionally inconclusive, sometimes passive and in need of more appropriate, specific vocabulary.
C- to C+ Sufficient. Noticeable lapses of clarity, some inaccurate statements, poorer arguments; some lack of grammatical integrity and inconsistent sentence structure; paper in need of better organization, perhaps not meeting word requirement; inconclusive, sometimes vague language, awkward voice with non-essential ‘padding’ using too little relevant, specific vocabulary.
D- to D+ Lack of clarity, statement and arguments inaccurate; poor, substandard grammar and sentence structure; poorly organized paper, perhaps not meeting word requirement; poor use of language without integral voice, some excess of non-essential ‘padding’ and predominance of non-specific vocabulary.
F Very little clarity with poor statements, weak and inaccurate arguments; unacceptably poor grammar and sentence structure; poorly organized paper perhaps not meeting word requirement; very poor use of language and with no consistent voice, dominated by non-essential ‘padding’ and lacking specific vocabulary.