Category: English and Literature : English

Which has been more significant in shaping American history: race or class? [Note: It is acceptable to argue that the significance of race or class has varied in different eras, but make sure you give concrete evidence.

Use your favorite novel or film series to write an adaptation of the plot or a sequel to a completed series. You may choose a classic novel as well. Take the characters, plot, and events that unfold and recreate an episode or a chapter from your favorite film or novel. Or, continue the book or episodes after a completed series. You may tweak the characters by making them more like individuals you know in real life than the original characters if desired. You also use fictional examples from real-life in the new storyline.
Examples:
-Twilight
-The Selection
-Harry Potter
-Star Wars
-The Lord of the Rings
-Pride and Prejudice
Instructions: Review the writing process. This is step two. Make sure to prewrite beforehand. Map out the Aristotelian plot structure beforehand. Use a formal outline using MLA 9th ed. format. Type the assignment in Times New Roman 12-point font.
Categories to consider before writing:
1. Subgenre: Will your story be humorous, adventurous, sad, or realistic?
2. Characterization: How many round (well-developed characters) or flat (characters that are not well-defined) will be used and why? Which characters will be defined using direct characterization and when will indirect characterization be used? How will this enhance the plot? Who will be the protagonist, or main character? Will there be an antagonist or villain?
3. Literary Techniques: Will you use visual, tactile, auditory imagery? Will metaphors, alliteration, personification, and simile be used? Will foreshadowing be used or will suspense be useful?
4. Plot Structure: Will the plot be arranged in chronological order or will it begin in media res? 
5. Audience: Will your audience relate to your writing style? Avoid informal diction. You may use the first person as this is a narrative. However, be original in the way that you write that is relatable to your audience. Be as detailed as possible.
6. Concision: How will your writing avoid wordiness? Cross through phrasal verbs, redundant adjectives, prepositional phrases to make your writing concise. Use more formal, precise diction instead.
7. Tone: How will your attitude towards the subject be made?
8. Mood: How will your imagery evoke an atmosphere?
9. Setting: Where will the story be set? Will this allow for a unique plot?
10. Dialogue: Will the dialogue be relatable to the audience and express the character’s thoughts, feelings, and desires effectively?
Follow the following format as closely as possible. Each paragraph should include at least five to six complete sentences.
I. Introduction.
A. Topic sentence- The topic sentence should draw your reader in and add suspense as you lead into the story. You could begin with backdrop or with an interesting statement or thought-provoking reflection of your protagonist.
B. Exposition. *This may be modified for media res to begin at the point of crisis in the beginning and move backward to unfold how the crisis happened.
1. Give context by describing where you want to begin in the plot.
2. Describe the main characters and set the stage for the next points. This should be around four to five sentences. Use imagery and literary techniques that are appropriate. You may include dialogue or a monologue if needed.
3. Conclude by summing up the purpose of the paragraph. This could a reflection from a character.
II. First Body Paragraph.
A. Topic sentence-Transition from the last paragraph. Connect the main idea in the last paragraph to the present.
B. Rising Action.
1. Cohesively lead into a series of events that will eventually lead to the crisis or the main point of conflict. Always describe any ideas and add specific details for character, place, time, etc. This should be five to five sentences. Include imagery that brings the narrative to life. Pretend you are there in that scene with the character. What details would you be focusing on? Use different vantage points and angles. Focus on symbolic details and representations. Include dialogue or monologues when needed.
C. Conclude by reaching the crisis or climax of the story. This is the central point of conflict. Conflict nay be external (man vs. nature) or internal (man vs. man).
D. Multimodal component- Include a media, such as an audio or visual source here for dramatic effect. Explain how the media source enhances the main conflict.
 
III. Second Body Paragraph.
A. Topic sentence-Transition from the last paragraph. Connect the main idea in the last paragraph to the present.
B.  Falling Action-Gradually transition from the crisis to a series of events that will eventually lead to a final outcome for the crisis, whether it is a peaceful ending or a tragedy. This should be four to five sentences. Include dialogue or monologues when needed.
C. Conclude by summing up the main point. This could be reflection from a character or an adage.
 
IV. Third Body Paragraph
A. Topic sentence-Transition from the last paragraph. Connect the main idea in the last paragraph to the present.
B.  Resolution or denuement-Identify the resolution to the central conflict. Identify whether the outcome is peaceful or tragic. This may include reconciliation among characters, new friendships formed, or mutual ties broken.
C. Conclude by summing up the main point. This could be reflection from a character or an adage.
V.  Conclusion
A.  Topic sentence-Transition from the last paragraph. Connect the main idea in the last paragraph to the present.
B. Identify the morals and life lessons learned. Why is the story relevant in our world and media today?
C. Identify the importance of any narrative techniques used to create the plot.
D. End with a clear reflection on the importance of the paper.

 Identify and examine key social, political, cultural and economic movements in American history.  

 In what specific ways has this identity been contested? Has this identity been broad and inclusive, or has it tended to create un-American or non-American “Others?”

What books and/or other readings would you use when developing lectures and discussions?  What books and/or other sources would you have the class read?  Defend and explain these choices.  

Write a first draft of your persuasive essay with an introduction, three body paragraphs, and conclusion. The aim of your persuasive essay is to convince your audience of the importance of your chosen theme in Italic text startDeath of a SalesmanItalic text End with arguments and evidence from the text that support its significance. Your essay should be 1,000–1,500 words long, in 12-point font, and double-spaced. All quotations you use from Italic text startDeath of a SalesmanItalic text End as well as any external sources used should be properly cited according to MLA style.

Ok So I have done the paper I need help correcting the error. I need some help going over the paper and finding up to date journals that support my documents

This is just a brief research paper. It is only supposed to be 6-8 pages and a works cited page.
Please no chapters or literature review.
I have listed sources that you may want to use to give a good start but you are not required to use them.
There are no rubrics for this assignment.
Please let me know if you have any questions……
The other option for a title is The Role of Parents in/on Christian Education. Or it can be a combined topic like The Role and Impact of Parents in Christian Education or The Role and Impact of Parents on Christian Education.

Take my essay written by Chatgpt and rewrite it into different words to make it undetected by AI. Keep the questions at the end of the essay but write the answers.
### Essay: Welcoming Jourdyn into My Life
The first time I held Jourdyn in my arms, everything else seemed to fade away. The world outside the walls of the hospital room, the responsibilities waiting for me back home, and the worries that had been circling my mind for the last nine months—none of it mattered in that moment. I had become a father, and the little girl blinking up at me with curious eyes was my daughter. Jourdyn. Even now, seven years later, I can still feel the weight of that moment, as if the gravity of it has been imprinted into my very being.
The journey to fatherhood was filled with anticipation, excitement, and, if I’m honest, a good measure of anxiety. I remember when my partner and I first found out we were expecting. The test sat on the bathroom counter, its digital face flashing a result that would forever change our lives. “Pregnant,” it read, as if the single word could sum up the whirlwind of emotions that instantly overtook us. We laughed, we cried, and we hugged each other tightly, both thrilled and terrified by the magnitude of what lay ahead.
As the months passed, our lives became a series of firsts. The first ultrasound, where we saw her tiny heart flickering on the screen like a firefly. The first kick, a gentle nudge from within that made everything suddenly feel real. The first time we argued about names, with “Jourdyn” being the only one we could agree on. We prepared as best we could, assembling cribs, folding onesies, and reading every parenting book we could get our hands on. But nothing could have truly prepared me for the moment I first laid eyes on her.
Jourdyn was born on a chilly October morning, when the leaves had just begun to turn their fiery shades of red and orange. The labor was long, and by the time she arrived, we were both exhausted, but the sight of her tiny face erased all of that in an instant. I remember the nurse placing her gently in my arms. She was so small, so fragile, her face scrunched up in protest at the cold air. But when she opened her eyes and looked at me, it was as if she recognized me, as if she knew she was safe.
In that instant, my life’s priorities shifted. Suddenly, everything revolved around her. The late nights of crying, the early mornings of feedings, and the endless diapers—none of it felt like a chore. Instead, it was a privilege, a responsibility I embraced wholeheartedly. I wanted to be the kind of father Jourdyn could look up to, someone she could rely on, someone who would always be there for her, no matter what.
As Jourdyn grew, so did our bond. Her first smile was a beam of sunlight on a cloudy day, her first word (“Dada”) a melody that played on repeat in my heart. Watching her take her first steps was like witnessing a miracle. She was strong-willed, determined, and full of curiosity. I would often find her examining the world around her with wide-eyed wonder, picking up leaves, poking at bugs, and asking endless questions about how things worked.
Now, at seven years old, Jourdyn is a bundle of energy and joy. She’s independent, confident, and wise beyond her years. Every day with her is an adventure. Whether we’re building forts in the living room, baking cookies in the kitchen, or just lying on the grass looking up at the clouds, she constantly reminds me of the beauty in life’s simplest moments. I love the way her face lights up when she talks about her day at school, her excitement as she tells me about the new friends she’s made or the latest story she’s read.
One of my favorite moments with Jourdyn is our nightly routine. Every night, before bed, we sit together on the couch, and she curls up next to me as I read her a story. It’s our time, just the two of us, and it’s a tradition I hope we can continue for many years to come. She listens intently, her big brown eyes following every word, and I can see her imagination running wild as she pictures the characters and places I describe. When the story is over, she looks up at me with a contented smile, and in that moment, I feel an overwhelming sense of gratitude for having her in my life.
Being a father to Jourdyn has been the most challenging and rewarding experience of my life. There have been tough days, days when I’ve questioned whether I’m doing this whole parenting thing right. But every time I see her smile, hear her laugh, or feel her little hand in mine, I know that I’m exactly where I’m meant to be. Fatherhood is a journey, one that I’m still navigating, but with Jourdyn by my side, I know it’s a journey I wouldn’t trade for anything in the world.
As I reflect on the last seven years, I realize that Jourdyn has taught me just as much as I’ve taught her. She’s taught me patience, kindness, and the importance of being present in the moment. She’s shown me the world through her eyes, a world full of wonder and endless possibilities. And most importantly, she’s shown me what it means to love unconditionally. Jourdyn is my heart, my joy, and my greatest accomplishment. I am proud to be her father, and I look forward to watching her continue to grow into the amazing person I know she will become.
### Reflection
**Which narrative techniques did you use to bring your narrative to life?**
To bring my narrative to life, I used vivid descriptions and sensory details to create a strong sense of emotion and connection. For example, I described the first time I held Jourdyn, focusing on the physical sensations and emotional weight of that moment: “I had become a father, and the little girl blinking up at me with curious eyes was my daughter.” Additionally, I used imagery to convey the significance of small, everyday moments, such as our nightly routine: “She curls up next to me as I read her a story… I can see her imagination running wild as she pictures the characters and places I describe.”
**How did your purpose and audience shape the way in which you wrote your narrative?**
My purpose in writing this narrative was to share the profound experience of becoming a father and the deep bond I’ve formed with my daughter, Jourdyn. I aimed to connect with readers who may have similar experiences or who can appreciate the emotional journey of parenthood. Knowing that my audience could be parents or those interested in family life, I focused on including specific, relatable details that would resonate with them, such as the mix of excitement and anxiety when preparing for a child, and the joys and challenges of raising a young daughter.
**Provide a concrete example from your narrative that shows how you have written specifically for this audience and purpose.**
One example from my narrative that was written with my audience in mind is the description of the moment Jourdyn was born: “Jourdyn was born on a chilly October morning, when the leaves had just begun to turn their fiery shades of red and orange.” This vivid description not only sets the scene but also evokes the feeling of a new beginning, something that many parents can relate to. The use of sensory details, such as the “fiery shades of red and orange,” was intended to draw the reader into the experience and create an emotional connection, aligning with my purpose of sharing the deep significance of fatherhood.

Revise this paper according to the suggestion of the professor:
Global Comment: This is solid work, but it needs additional revision and polishing before it’s ready for prime-time. Strengths of the screenplay include the scene work and dialogue, though I think some of that could be cut down in favor of more balance between action and dialogue in the final version. Strengths of the craft essay include the analysis of the story’s themes. But the craft essay is also where more revision could be done. You took a step forward with source integration by providing MLA citations, but you took two steps backwards because you did not cite assigned sources, as the assignment specifies. Also, you won’t maximize your score in the craft essay category unless you more substantively engage with both your screenplay and the secondary sources. Therefore I strongly urge you to integrate quotes. See the WARP exercise on quoting and the lesson on integrating sources in Week 2 for more on this. I really want to see you master this skill, because if you do, it will set you up well in this assignment and in the final E-port to maximize the scores. Finally, you need a stronger argument. Focus on clarifying the message and purpose first before diving into the fancy language about “communication media” and “ethical foundations.” This all sounds very smart but right now each of these thoughts is incomplete because it’s not clear what message you’re articulating or what specific audience you’re trying to reach. Nail those down first. Looking forward to reading the final draft!
The doc document is the previous draft you have written; The pdf draft contains all the primary and secondary sources assigned that is allowed in this assignment. The other pdfs are the assigned readings. No outside sources allowed.