I need this essay that follows the feedback that I’m gonna share and every parag
I need this essay that follows the feedback that I’m gonna share and every paragraph with the exact same ideas but written in a different way because mostly it’s AI content.
For the introduction, where you have the statement ″The thesis statement posits that both artists, despite the common cultural backdrop, utilize national heritage in unique ways that contribute to the identity discourse in Sweden and Norway.″ Make sure that you go on to summarise what these unique ways were. This should not only emerge through your discussion but be set up from the beginning and then delivered through your discussion.
With Carl Larsson you will need to distinguish, or comment on the interweaving of ideas of traditional rural life and modern ideas about the good life and family in Sweden. I hope you have come across mention of Ellen Key in your reading? In fact, for both artists it will be important to acknowledge that their use of tradition was blended with modern ideas.
I do not find your structuring of the main body of your essay particularly easy to follow. It seems very ideas focused and I think it will be difficult not to get repetitive. It might make more sense to arrange your discussion through a set of case studies, particularly the two homes of the artists. Then you can make sure that you have brought out all the ideas that you want to. Of course, it may just be, that in a brief summary I am not getting a sense of what it is you are planning to discuss.
Do you feel you have found enough readings? If you need further suggestions, let me know what you have already found and looked at.
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