Feedback from week 3 assignment. Your work is off to a fine start with some oppo

Feedback from week 3 assignment. Your work is off to a fine start with some oppo

Feedback from week 3 assignment. Your work is off to a fine start with some opportunities for improvement as you work on your final draft. Your thesis and opening paragraph are very well done and you apply most course material effectively to the case study. One revision needed is to replace your discussion of consequentialism with utilitarianism–you have mislabeled the theory. In addition to making the revision noted above, please be sure to also consider and rebut an objection to your thesis as you work on the final draft of your paper due in week five.