I need a tutor who has helped students apply successfully to the university befo

I need a tutor who has helped students apply successfully to the university befo

I need a tutor who has helped students apply successfully to the university before.
( make sure you have successful cases, I need to go through your case first) .
If you do not have experience with polish personal statements before, please do not take this order!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
You have to submit your successful cases before you polish my PS!!!!
I am going to apply 6 universities, So there are total 6 personal statements you need to polish and proofreading。
I will submit them One by one, it means after you finish one of six and submit here to me, Then I will upload second one PS to you , then you can continue to work, remember, total is 6 PS.
you need to mark the polished part.(as images I upload shows) use different colors to show your polishment and add some Review & critique
Make sure you go through the documents I sent to you, it will be helpful for writing PS.
You need to provide :
In-depth proofreading
Grammar + syntax review
line edit
rewriting( Only you think my work is too bad quality, you can based on my information to rewrite it )
Word-choice suggestions
Sentence review + restructuring
Ensuring consistency and overall flow
Detailed content review and comprehensive feedback to ensure my application stands out
Multiple revisions to perfect your statement
in-depth review of my statement, improving grammar, style, flow + detailed feedback.