The document (doctoral dissertation chapter 2) needs to be rewritten to change t

The document (doctoral dissertation chapter 2) needs to be rewritten to change t

The document (doctoral dissertation chapter 2) needs to be rewritten to change the writing style to academic writing and the approach used in the literature review. The dissertation chair included some comments in the document that must be addressed. Please add more literature if needed. Also, please follow the attached dissertation template. Thanks!