Improve my paper so that it fits academic criteria- correct it and make it nice
Improve my paper so that it fits academic criteria- correct it and make it nice and understandable. Statistical knowledge required for this.
Other than that its a straightforward job.
3. In the last paragraph of introduction section, you wrote “in this research project” whereas it is not a research project rather a research paper so you should write “in this study”
4. In the last paragraph of the introduction section, you used the word “will” for example “we will assess” and “we will employ”. Whereas you have now done this study, so you should remove the word “will” and should write “we assessed” or “we employed”.
5. In the introduction section you should discuss the research gap your study fills in and what is the novelty of your study.
6. Literature review is too short add more relevant studies in the treasure review section
7. Main section headings such as Introduction, Literature Review, Methodology should be numbered and left aligned
8. Table captions should be inserted according to the APA 7th style
9. In the Variables’ section, you wrote that you employed 3 variables and the first one you discussed is “the year”, here YEAR is not available. correct it.
10. Figure captions should be inserted as per APA 7th style
11. In figure 3 and Figure 4 you inserted the screenshot of STATA whereas it is the wrong format to report result. Rather, insert the table and write the results manually. I suggest you refer of relevant studies and see how they report the results
12. In the last conclusion section, you inserted a table. Normally we don’t give any table in the conclusion section rather conclude the whole study in one or two paragraphs. You also report the results in conclusion section which is not a correct format of an article
13. Apart all of the above suggestions there are a lot of other grammatical mistakes and sentence structure mistakes and I think that this paper is very much in a weak form to publish in any good reputed journal.
Also abstract is missing…
And its a journal article- so needs to be a bit changed…
needs improvement and correction, also proper analysis and conclusion