Revise and edit a paragraph about what I have learned from my contributions in t

Revise and edit a paragraph about what I have learned from my contributions in t

Revise and edit a paragraph about what I have learned from my contributions in the club based off of the comment I have provided in the doc. The first paragraph is just for your context and that is where I state my contributions to the club (you don’t need to touch that one). The next paragraph is what I would like you to edit/revise. You can keep the information that is already there but before it (still same paragraph) add information based off of the comment. When it seems necessary you can also make up an example that seems to prove your point. Also don’t start the paragraph with “I have learned…” rather make it a seamless transition between the last paragraph and this.