Please: I will upload the work, and I need that you follow the recommendations a
Please: I will upload the work, and I need that you follow the recommendations about it, and see the rubric and fix the entire paper with the recommendations and the rubric. I will upload the word document, and the rubric.
Recomendations:
title nees to be more specific – paragraph 1 page 2 is actually page 1(page count based on TEXT..not title, abstract, or resources
use which instead of what
be more specific as to what you mean by resource allocation
specifically state how the strategies are actionable
explain orgainization yields
explain which ratios could be used and specifically how they might be interpreted and integrated
how are you using payback? – as a financial metric or a capital bugeting tool…it is not a capital budgeting tool..it is merely a stepping stone towards valuation..
a paper in this course is not expected to be comprehensive…”Comprehensive: would be a book!
explain the next steps specifically in your road ,ap
if you are going to conduct “comparative approach” then you need to provide data exhibiting your findings explain the costs and benefits of telehealth
you do have some writing errors
be careful of the use of “such as”..
include your resources within your paper
explain what ACO are and how they impact your study
expand your discussion using specifics
do not use the word “like” in research
be specific as to what a “positive trend” trend is…give ##
liquidity and debt are both in the same category as far as financial analysis is concerned..they are financial health ratios
Capital budgeting effectiveness depends on the application of the tools rather than the mathematical formulas which do not change – NPV is still NPV..
capital budgeting does not look at financing techniques specifically – the WACC includes financing – Capital budgeting accesses asset management – not financing – so..the costs of loans is figured into the % WACC not part of the outcome rather part of the inputs
throughout your paper – you need to be more specific – you are writing in terms which are too broad
page 13 you make some statements about regulations
what are the costs of becoming green – are they sustainable – be specific – as to casts and benefits
throughout your paper you need more specificity
page 14..”Those who do not adapt digitally may face challenges…be more specific – this statement is very vague
In your recommendation you need to explain HOW..
how does healthcare diversify revenue steams – be specific
how does healthcare industry enhance patients financial background?
how is trust built
how should staff be trained
make your conclusions YOUR OWN
looking into these areas will improve your papers score
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