I need help piecing my analytical essay together, especially the introduction/ t

I need help piecing my analytical essay together, especially the introduction/ t

I need help piecing my analytical essay together, especially the introduction/ thesis and body paragraph. I need it to be at least a B paper as I have been getting low grades in my analytical essay. Here is the story / text my paper needs to be based on and these are the essay instructions in which my professor is going to be looking for based on my final paper, I attached mulstiple screenshots of her essay instructions and also she is looking for me to incorprate the information I wrote on my brainstorm for the essay, which is also attached.