A personal statement for the University of Manchester admission; 1. Why have yo

A personal statement for the University of Manchester admission;
1. Why have you chosen this course?
2. What excites you about the subject?
3. Is my previous or current study relevant to the course?
4. Have you got any work experience that might help you?
5. What life experiences have you had that you could talk about?
6. What achievements are you proud of?
7. What skills do you have that make you perfect for the course?
8. What plans and ambitions do you have for your future career?
I attached my written essay which needs improvement, along with my resume.