Hi, I’m requesting the editing and revision or rewriting of a 11-12 double space

Hi, I’m requesting the editing and revision or rewriting of a 11-12 double space

Hi, I’m requesting the editing and revision or rewriting of a 11-12 double space page research paper for my near east asian studies class that deals with women in the ancient world. In other words, I would be given the final draft for this research paper assignment. The instructions and rubric for this assignment are attached. I have also attached the rough draft that attempts to complete this assignment. The rough draft has been annotated by my professor, so please make sure to look at those annotations and improve the paper accordingly. Additionally, I have attached the peer review worksheet that was done by a classmate in what should be improved, so you can also use that as guidance when writing the final draft. Another attachment that you should find below is a screenshot of some additional comments left by my professor in regards to the rough draft that I have attached, so please do look at those as well when writing the final draft. I have attached a file titled “Thesis and Annotated Bibliography” to help you as well since in this file, the research question used for this paper is listed along with the thesis and the annotated bibliography, but you can of course rewrite the thesis to make it much better.