Hi please respond to my professor’s response or feedback on my post, For referen

Hi please respond to my professor’s response or feedback on my post,
For references please use one of your referxbed a textbook: Pathophysiology: a practical approach 5th edition by L. Story 2024. (I believe this can be found online ).
And pls check rubric grading I uploaded with this order as well- and highly consider when writing this paper: thanks for your help!