I need you to write more to the essay, Where I need it to be atleast 11 pages of

I need you to write more to the essay, Where I
need it to be atleast 11 pages of

I need you to write more to the essay, Where I
need it to be atleast 11 pages of single spaced writing not counting the table
of contents or the references. So, write 4 more pages, you can add pictures or
visuals but they shouldn’t count towards the total page count. I need 11 pages
of pure writing. You must make sure that all 15 pages are cited in the in-text
citations. THe thesis is also very broad so I need you to give a more specific
thesis.
below attached doc is my final draft