Please make my cover letter better and not just the resume; I am trying to get a
Please make my cover letter better and not just the resume; I am trying to get a job, but the cover letter I have now is not sufficient.
Dear Hiring Team,
I am applying for the position as an entry level. I have a bachelor’s degree in sociology from
California State University, Northridge, and I am a recent MBA graduate from Northcentral
University. I have over three years of experience in the food and hospitality industry, most
recently as a Kitchen manager at Chipotle Mexican Grill. I provided a great client experience,
managed inventory, and ensured high-quality food was served. I also have over one year of
experience as a background check investigator at Evolution Consulting, where I utilized third
party verification systems and companies to acquire job verification, as well as investigation
approaches.
In both of my previous roles, I demonstrated my attention to detail, database analysis,
communication skills, and my ability to work with diverse and multicultural teams. I also used
my bilingual skills in Spanish to interpret for Spanish-speaking applicants over the phone and
help my team as a translator. I am passionate about learning and applying new skills to solve
problems and improve processes. I am motivated by the opportunity to contribute to the growth
and success of an organization that values integrity, innovation, and customer satisfaction. I can
bring diverse perspectives and experiences to the team, as well as a positive and collaborative
attitude.
I have attached my resume for your review, and I look forward to speaking with you. Thank you
for your consideration,
Sincerly,